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Scenic Memories

Winter hangs onto the top of the mountain with some snow Spring has taken over below, with greenery, flowers and warmth While cold memories are transformed in the miles of beauty Heidi Sands 5/24/18

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/29/2018 11:28:00 AM

Enjoyed your poem. Trying this form for first time. Best wishes.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2018 12:43:00 PM

I am happy to hear you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comment :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/25/2018 9:48:00 AM

I love the third line and the metamorphosis of a seasons reign . Thank you for sharing your smart eye and nifty pen Heidi. Have a great day

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 9:57:00 AM

Thank you very much Pixie :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/25/2018 7:56:00 AM

I love the line, cold memories transformed, Heidi, A wonderful Sijo. Happy Friday !!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Mike. I am happy you like it. Happy Friday! :)

Yazmin Malik

Date: 5/25/2018 6:45:00 AM

Lovely <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Yazmin. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/25/2018 1:58:00 AM

You're becoming the sijo queen Heidi. Tom. Thankfully winter becoming a distant memory.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 7:06:00 AM

Not really Tom lol. I have only done 2. Yes, thankfully winter is gone for now. We have a touch of it left on the distant mountain here. Thank you for your comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/24/2018 7:09:00 PM

A lovely Sijo Heidi...best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 7:16:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/24/2018 4:07:00 PM

Lovely contrast between the images..beautiful poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 5:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay :)