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I stayed up late to play all night because it was so nice, but now the sun is coming up and I must pay the price. My eyes are stuck, my head it hurts and I can’t seem to move, it’s going to take some extra time to get me in my groove. I don’t think there is anything to break me from this spell; my clock is snoozing as I wait to hear the second bell. It tried one time to wake me up but I showed I’d resist; I hit the button on the top with full force of my fist. But now it seems I’m out of time and must be on my way; the world around me isn’t going to wait to start the day. So, “up and at ‘em,” as they say, I’m off to get things done, and tonight when I get the chance I’ll go down with the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/19/2018 11:34:00 AM
Hello Cary, that is what you get when you stay up late on a week day night. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/27/2018 3:11:00 PM
I can so relate to this poem! I think pretty much everyone can, which is really cool
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Cary Snowden
Date: 8/1/2018 11:06:00 AM
Thank you for the note, Leah! I stay up late WAY too often. So much to do! -Cary

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