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Saver

Let me tell you a story Many years ago I bought a puppy Displayed at the street corner for sale Caged alone under the sun, hungry and frail. When the street vendor handed him to me He licked my hands, wagged his tail happily He ate three bananas in my basket Poor pup unfed for long hours, I bet. I brought him to my boarding house to stay But my landlady didn’t like dogs- to my dismay She asked me to keep him outside But kids stoned him for fun, he didn’t hide. I attended his head’s bleeding wounds While cringing in pain with whining sounds I put bandages then named him Saver To be my hero at times of danger. Saver grew up brave and smart on my lap He knew who’d hurt him when he was a pup He’d loved and enjoyed his weekend-bath Tooth brush, fur-paws scrub with nails' cut. But he was food poisoned at playground twice He came home dying, I was vet in disguise Giving him three spoonfuls of sugar I'd revived him with my loving power. He was my faithful body guard at night He accompanied me without fright At stores and pay-phone calls outside He never left me…always at my side. One day, I came home from work And propelled to a barbeque stand at the park I felt someone holding my shoulder from the back Oh my! It was him standing! He rocked. Then, time came to leave my country I couldn’t take him, I was so sorry I entrusted him to my friend and her family But he died after a year waiting for me.
April 21,2022 10.10pm Theme: pets The true story of my dog when I worked at the city. Saver died 2008. I requested somebody to make a figurine that exactly looks like him. It’s now displayed at our living room in my birth place. This is my 2nd poem tribute for Saver. Form N - Narrative - New Poems Contest Judged: 4/27/2022 1:42:00 PM Sponsored by: Constance La France Place: 1

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Date: 5/9/2022 7:47:00 AM
Len, excellent and congratulations on your First Place win in my Narrative, Let me tell you a story ... contest, your poem leaves me weeping, beautiful writing, blessings ~Constance
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/9/2022 9:23:00 PM
I was teary eyed while scribbling my words my dear friend Constance. I love Saver so much and I couldn't forget this precious/lovely pet of mine. Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest and the inspiration to write this souvenir poem for my dog. I've 2 poems for him already. 1st dog poem when I found PS/ God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 5/1/2022 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write in Constance's contest. Blessings to you
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/4/2022 6:40:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend Eve for reading my work and your congratulatory greetings. Blessings to you too. Hugs
Date: 4/28/2022 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing story/write. So sad yet wonderful. Have you read the rainbow bridge for pets??? It is on the web. I think you would love it. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/30/2022 9:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your congratulatory greetings and your precious time stopping by to read my poem my dear friend Paula. Oh, I haven't come across on that readings yet my dear friend. I'll go and read. Thank you, thank you so much. God bless you always. Lots of hugs from me. Have a great/blessed day too.
Date: 4/28/2022 6:55:00 AM
"he died after a year waiting for me" - Dogs are loyal, they say. Beautiful story. Congratulations!
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/30/2022 9:20:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend Christuraj for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always. Hugs

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