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Sapling Tears

Sadness sweeps the grove, Withered trees hang their heads down; Weeping tears of sap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/12/2009 2:11:00 PM
nice.
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:38:00 AM
'Weeping tears of sap' such a melancholy image, in a well penned haiku. Kat x
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Date: 5/5/2009 12:54:00 PM
Weeping tears of sap, I like how you pen these descriptions to convey a powerful scene. Tyler
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Date: 5/4/2009 11:20:00 AM
awsome!!! last line was great!!! i love!!!
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Date: 5/3/2009 7:27:00 PM
This is a well written haiku ... and a powerfu poem, love it.
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Date: 5/3/2009 7:14:00 AM
Yesterday here, the trees were weeping heavily with rain as well....dripping as they held their branches low. I enjoyed this poem!
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Date: 5/3/2009 12:20:00 AM
Beautiful analogy on life in this picture Raul.Rgds Brian
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