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Sankofa is a legend of Ghana and Mustafa is a legend in Safranbolu.

‘Sankofa’ In 'Safranbolu' This bird from Ghana’s legends flies forward looking backward In the Twi language twinned with indigenous souls and wisdom the feathered friend suggests to go back and get it and I suppose some fly backwards while looking ahead but then life is not only Chronos but 'Kairos' with the meter entwined and composed At this precise moment not alone in this moving instant it waves and oscillates conjoining what was and will be when the present is the past in a flash and one cannot step into the same river again yet the future is shaped by the past the here and now a 'Kairometer' transcending artefacts and boundaries into ‘truths’ and reality The bird flies and time flows back and beyond near and far further on wings and pinions with roots at heart In ‘Safranbolu’ the ancient Ottoman town on the Black Sea Coast and thus close to Ghana in real time place and connection the old man had been tending the clock in the tower both man and the turret free standing and wise still present and one ‘Seventy years’ as he explained pendulum hands and the wheels What memories pride mechanics precision preserved aspiration and dignity flying into the face of the clock and the distortions of time Mustafa had climbed those steps so often had rung the bell oiled the time keeper had not forgotten a day of his duties had become one with the time piece and stood still many times in awe of monument and pacing the sleepy old town yet he flew forward so peacefully looking back in retrospect and respect He has watched birds history duration impermanence imprinting the meaning of a life worthy of living in honour of what is the present 20th November in all past and future revisited

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Date: 11/30/2016 3:37:00 PM
This is like being in a film like The Matrix Kai. Suspended animation of time and place. I would love to witness your Kairometer. Amazingly different poem.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/1/2016 1:35:00 AM
Thank you Jean. Your appreciation is a good start to my day...
Date: 11/25/2016 7:53:00 AM
Your style is so unique, Kai:) congratulations on this lovely win:)
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Date: 11/26/2016 12:18:00 AM
Thank you Jo. I much appreciate that.
Date: 11/24/2016 11:58:00 PM
Wonderful Kai, wonderful... I love the tale and how it stretches over wide distances both in time and in geography. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/25/2016 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Darren. It is morning for me here and time moves on, still and silent. many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/24/2016 10:48:00 PM
This is truly a class apart. Amazing writing. Congratulations, Kai!
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Date: 11/25/2016 1:29:00 AM
Thank you Tamal. In real time, I am just waking up with my coffee, but the old man in Safronbolu is there already. Wishes to you, Kai
Date: 11/24/2016 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations Kai on the first placement of the contest.
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Date: 11/25/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Nadya. i so much appreciate that.What a start to my day. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/23/2016 1:22:00 AM
This is an astounding piece of work.where do you find it.? Its like being suspended in another era. Me thinks you put a lot of work in here. It commands respect and I hope it gets well received by the other Soupers. "Hey you lot come read this one!!!!"
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Date: 11/23/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you Jannie. To answer your your question, I have no idea, but I know that my South African wife is a real inspiration...Many wishes, Kai

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