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Leaving Keeps Coming Back!

That muddy Mississippi couldn't wash away the things she said! So i packed my bags, caught the next plane out to Hilton head 'Thinking the sea and the sand and sun might set me free But the hurt's the same, nothing's changed except for the scenery This salt water is pouring in an open wound The pain comes and goes like the tide ebb and flows...every afternoon But that ocean spray can't wash away these old Memphis blues Salt water.....keeps pouring in an open wound I should have gone to the Smoky's...maybe they could get me over you It's plain to see...this ocean resort don't know we're through I'll spend the night in my room...wishing I was in some other place Where you won't appear in every tear...falling down my face This salt water is pouring in an open wound............ Colab with Jimmy Melton Protected by copyright All rights reserved

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Date: 9/14/2018 10:38:00 AM
Oh, Chuck, the harrowing sting and pain of heartache is so poetically expressed in your sadly emotional collaboration with Jimmy Melton. Unfortunately, wherever you go, your broken heart goes with you. Your poignant imagery is beautifully moving.. Loved it! Warmest wishes, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 9/19/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thanks so much sweet Susan! Your words sing!

Book: Shattered Sighs