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Sagging Dreams

Blown into tiny smithereens Festooned with velvet drapes A nightly dream, what could it mean Holding the fast escape Waiting to meet another sun Dreams lined up the clothesline Sagging to revive unread plan Let free my confined mind Date: March 30, 2015

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Date: 4/23/2015 1:54:00 AM
Continue to cherish your dreams, kabayan. Blessings! 7. :) Kim
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Date: 3/30/2015 2:34:00 PM
Very creative piece, a 7, and good luck in the contest. Blessings eve
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Date: 3/30/2015 5:27:00 AM
I like your take on this. Its very creative. All the best in the contest.
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