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Sadness

This sadness is seeping Leaking, spilling out Of every cell in my body. Craving a bullet A rope Or pills To End This Pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/6/2014 7:22:00 PM
Sadness explained perfectly in this short piece, amazing choice of imagery in this short piece. Enjoyable piece. Check out some of my poems,might find some you like, Peace.
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Date: 1/24/2014 6:50:00 AM
An intense work of art...Please keep writing! !!
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Date: 1/23/2014 2:47:00 PM
Each word is caked with that title. Thank goodness it doesn't last forever. Hope you have a great rest of the week and write on! I enjoy your raw and emotional material. Can't wait to read some more. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/23/2014 2:44:00 PM
- Painful thoughts and bereavement - well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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