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her place smells like lavender or violets i've slept here many times before but never well never fitfully alien atmosphere i suppose the bare bulbs in the bathroom kill my shadow i'm a stranger in the kitchen smoking weed on the couch pissing in the tiolet and screwing her in the shower intimately removed she wants me to move in i miss her already

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/17/2009 10:57:00 AM
I am quickly becoming a fan Brian, great work! and a very fitting title
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Date: 4/16/2009 5:59:00 PM
wow brian, wow
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Date: 4/16/2009 4:13:00 PM
You should have a warning on your poetry and I mean that in the best possible way.
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Date: 4/16/2009 10:42:00 AM
hooked on it ... I feel the mood. Bravo
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