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Rough

Love is a bit of comedy, so be rough with love. He arranges her one way and then another, in itchy dissatisfaction. She surrenders to the role like a silent bystander, a plaything in the hands of impatience - what does he want? “Like this,” he says in a schoolteacher’s voice. The imbalance of power, the almost impersonal manipulations, the momentum toward surrender, and then the shocking, primal desire - to meld - like a gunshot in a canyon long thought empty.

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Date: 6/3/2022 10:48:00 AM
Reverberations amidst revelations. Aloha!
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/3/2022 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Rico, Aloha!
Date: 6/2/2022 10:42:00 PM
Affirmed, then dissected, quite powerful Anais, good work!
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/3/2022 6:03:00 AM
Thank you James

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