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Risks

RISKS Scarred hills, risked mine shafts, dark and deep. The plonk of a stone, dropped into water, far below. Kids drifted to sounds of the gold-rush, pick and windlass. But inside our school, Sir recruited afternoon classes into battle. We piloted Spitfires, strafing Messerschmitts. Bingo! The plane aflame, out of control. Drifting down, down. A spiral of smoke. Our teacher paced, face aglow. Alive to the tremble, the thrill, in distant summer skies. Windscreen hit, the scatter of shattered glass. His odyssey of courage and blood … At three thirty, older boys reminded Sir, Time to go home. Surprise in our mentor’s eyes . His Spitfire hadn’t even landed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/3/2024 2:57:00 PM
This poem is incredible. The message, the imagery, the style, word choice, building a scene and giving the characters life...I felt like I was watching a movie and was as surprised as "Sir" was to realize this was a skit. Thank you, Decima.
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Decima Wraxall
Date: 3/3/2024 9:44:00 PM
Thank you, Lacey, for your comments. It's always a thrill to know that the poem worked as I'd hoped. Sir never did get to land that plane!

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