Rise and Shine

A white torn garment she wore,
fidgeted and partied alone in the air.
Neither knowing fully well her plight,
Nor understanding her whereabouts,
She kept on racing and rocking
In the oblivion cloud.
On her own,
She raised her voice like never near Ears.
Many at times, yelled at the free sky.
On her true hue, not shy;
"Angels, please fall from the Heaven.
I request you rock with me!"
She in her solitary, calmly stepped on.
This time, walked near a pool
She was a barefooted *****
Seemingly horrified and terrified; 
drank and washed herself in the pool.
"Aren't there any haven near by
To put on with at this time of the day?"
Now rescued her God-known amputating life!
Though, on the hop, she sought and found
And hopped for a hostel hereabouts.
"Now I see, angels are near"
She danced into the erected cover clouds;
"Are angels still going to see me here?"
As she entered, she solemnly prayed,
In sotto voce,
"Verily, I seek refuge with the Lord of this haven,
As I live to live and lay in peace." 
As though she understood it all:
The such in dreams and the such in life.
So determined in and with her timeline;
And so she rose to the top.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/17/2013 10:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win, Abdulhafeez
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 11/20/2013 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Dr Ram.
Date: 11/17/2013 8:18:00 PM
Very unique piece, I really enjoyed it.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 11/20/2013 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Rich Crown.
Date: 11/17/2013 3:58:00 PM
I haven't seen you around at all my friend.. Are you mad at us me?... . Congratulation, Thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ LINDA
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 11/20/2013 5:28:00 PM
Thanks for the placement. And thanks once more for everything.
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