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"rise Agaisn'T God"

By this juice It hurts us all God made us see See the light never bloomed No burying for us Totally insane After so many years Nothing to see beyond this mountain Sooner Later Falls same Not a single shot Not further from the sky Just one step to say it out loud Hate us all Make us hate See us hate Feel us hate We all hate equal Better take our side For the time you fear We will rule this land Know we all died Feel us grasp you softly Make me see how far you and i Were we headed A thousand years ago Not a chance No sky No hell You see me same ways There's no were to run We kings deserve your sou We kings better hide from him God made us God did this But why we scream at god hate us For then to place blame I see you burn A hell of ice I make it burn You and i will whisper the wind I promise we deserve the world in half Hate us all Make us hate See us hate Feel us hate We all hate equal Better take our side For the time you fear We will rule this land Mean while we grasp our faces Mean while you sit to watch us burn I deserve better life We all do I walk fields of blood An ocean to see But a fall of the cloud Didn't quite held the truth We deserve a soul An wide full chest I promise darling we will burn But i fall same way Same hole My face made a sin I hate this I hate him I hated all of this Now i live for this I mourn the sky a savior Oh god what have we all done Hate us all Make us hate See us hate Feel us hate We all hate equal Better take our side For the time you fear We will rule this land A price to pay Will not grow I sober up slow A fate never escaped An inferno to feel Help us all Help us hate We all deserve the pain you died with A life A savior Strike us all Alive we all burn Never dying We mourn it Now we scream it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/26/2010 8:21:00 AM
It seems this is a very bleak outlook on life, filled with despair, Derek. There are times when I feel sad and wonder, "Why am I here? Only to endure pain?" Perhaps this is how you were feeling when you posted this poem. I hope you are feeling more upbeat now, my friend. These dismal times usually pass -- at least that's what I keep telling myself. Let's make a deal -- I'll hang on to hope if you will. Okay? Love, Carolyn
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Derek Ortiz
Date: 3/1/2014 6:51:00 PM
It has been years since you commented this and tonight I decided to read my writings again. Thank you for some empathy and kindness, and just for you to know I will hang on hope while you continue to it as well.
Date: 9/25/2010 11:55:00 PM
Sounds scary.
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:38:00 PM
Nice poem. Love Scarlett
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