Resilience

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Resilience

the northern wind bites the frost has muted the brook -- stubborn is water

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Tom Woody

Date: 11/28/2023 6:21:00 AM

Perfect metaphor for resilience.

A. Ormulyce
Date: 12/31/2023 7:11:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/27/2023 10:25:00 AM

Its always good to read your work dear ormulyce, I absolutely love the depth of this haiku; even in few syllables you reflect the deeply intriguing and soulful touch of your descriptive ink as you write “ stubborn is water” “frost has muted…” beautiful imagery. Loved this

A. Ormulyce
Date: 11/28/2023 1:52:00 AM

Thank you so much for your encouraging comment. I hope all is fine for you. I like how we can inspire with a haiku. Take care of yourself.

Silent One

Date: 11/27/2023 10:13:00 AM

Hey its PG, great haiku.. The imagery is quite vivid.. so much in only a few words..

A. Ormulyce
Date: 11/28/2023 1:54:00 AM

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed this haiku. Telling a lot in a few words is what I find the most appealing in poetry. Take care of yourself.