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Repeating Anxiously, Repeats

Can't wait to see you, anxious for tonight. Anxious for tonight, we'll hold hands left within right. We'll hold hands left within right, as your eyes sparkle amongst the moons light. As your eyes sparkle amongst the moons light, kissing your lips that are parted so slight. Kissing your lips that are parted so slight, hearts beating as one breast to chest so tight. Hearts beating as one, breast to chest so tight, we'll hold hands left within right. We'll hold hands left within right, anxious for tonight. Anxious for tonight, can't wait to see you.

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/22/2019 11:00:00 PM

Interesting form. It really puts emphasis on the anxiousness and earnest desire.

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 1/22/2020 11:56:00 AM

Juliet, once again..my response time is unacceptable..ty so much for taking time to read and comment.sumtimes we have an idea unsure..the outcome.idk..I like this idea and the outcome. Ty..Bless you always Juliet.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/1/2019 6:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest with this romantic piece Kenneth. : )

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 6/2/2019 1:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie, I value poem comments as much as the poetry itself..congrats to you as well with contest. I enjoyed your entry even with its somber tone. When we write our expressions, are so much more committed..Thankyou again..God Bless you always. :-)