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Refurbished Nursery Rhymes: Song of the Piper's Son

"Tom, Tom the piper's son Stole a pig and away he run. The pig was eat, And Tom was beat, And Tom went crying down the street." Now, this rhyme, For a reader, Offers minimal relief As to who ate the pig Or who chastised the thief. And why Tom was punished When his dad wasn't able To pipe well enough To put food on the table? I can only hope that the author Wound up in the slammer For promoting delinquency, Child abuse… And really bad grammar!

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Date: 3/31/2024 4:55:00 AM
You do these so well Jim..
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 3/31/2024 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, S O. I really enjoy doing them.
Date: 3/30/2024 2:17:00 PM
I'm wit ya Jim. These old nursery rhymes are a riot when you really analyze them. Some are quite dark, such as in Ring around the Rosie
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Date: 3/31/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I may get to "Rosie" one of these days.

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