Refuge

Political pressures had not been tyrannizing me,
Nor out of severe social strangulations, I did flee;
The I in me and me in I, decide my death decree,
Owing to these I've been a cursed nomadic refugee...!

Where has my immaculately innocent psyche gone?
Unto whose infatuation my spirit flirted on?
Pathetic, is the disposition of a refugee,
Who, from his iridescent inner self is forced to flee...!

The war within me, like betwixt devils, is horrible,
The perplexities that surround me, are deplorable;
Is each vice oozing from out of the blue ignorable?
Is my lost image, as designed by God, restorable?

Do the physic and the psyche of a refugee, still
sweep away the subtle suppleness of power to will?
Fugitivity from self, like the inferno, does grill,
The enthusiasm of very existence, it does kill...!

The trifles that I had held as values, I've, now, upturned,
My refuge is my love-loaded intrinsic me, I've learned;
As the prodigal son, appeased, toward home I've returned,
Within my very self, my place in this cosmos, I've earned...!


05 April 2023 
Writing Challenge - 'R' Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Rhymes Checked At: Rhyme Zone
Syllables Checked At: How Many Syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 4/8/2023 10:33:00 AM
Great write Christuraj! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/7/2023 12:50:00 PM
- Words of truth and emotion ... excellently written, Alex - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/7/2023 8:31:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/7/2023 4:06:00 AM
"Fugitivity from self, like the inferno, does grill, The enthusiasm of very existence, it does kill...!" Great lines and so very true. Happy that the poem has ended on a very positive note. Though I know it is fictional, its tone has been disturbing. Congratulations on your win dear Chris.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/7/2023 7:21:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very objective observations and comments. I need your views as you are an expert in this.
Date: 4/6/2023 8:29:00 PM
Christuraj, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/6/2023 9:08:00 PM
Thank you very much for giving me this opportunity. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/6/2023 8:14:00 PM
Your thoughts are profound and uplifting. Congratulations on your podium win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/6/2023 9:09:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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