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 I was lying in bed talking to my only support at home, Jesus, as I said to Him: Well, how about I write a poem? But I thought I heard an audible voice saying, "that's a wonderful idea," as I did a 360-degree turnaround. I swore I did, though, because it startled me. So, I'd say something else out loud. And it was silent. That's how this poem received its title. 

Rational thinking, Wise to choose. It's a little bit harder, Nothing more for me to lose. -Broken dreams. -Broken hearts. -Broken wings. -My broken parts. Rational thinking, Wise to choose. It's a little bit harder now, Nothing more for me to lose. I'm struggling harder, To stay alive. I'm struggling harder now, To say goodbye. Rational thinking, Wise to choose. It's a little bit harder now, Nothing more for me to lose. -Please come, fix me. -Please, fix me now. Rational thinking, Wise to choose. I'm struggling harder now, Nothing more for me to lose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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