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Raisin Bread Break-Up

Raisin Bread of which I bought the wrong one. You are white, I wanted wheat. You are hard, I prefer soft. I will return and buy a new Raisin Bread. But you, I will never forget.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/2/2009 8:40:00 PM
Welcome to the soup! =) nice piece
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Date: 10/2/2009 7:37:00 PM
Witty free verse, Sincerely Moses, welcome to soup.
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Date: 10/2/2009 2:08:00 PM
This was fun to read, light and enjoyable!! (You could always make toast!! :) !!
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Date: 10/2/2009 7:00:00 AM
Danielle, I am still laughing. Thank you for writing and sharing your poem and getting my day going in a beautiful way. Love, Carol
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