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Suzette Richards sponsored 

Birds of Paradise contest

15 syllables quatrain with abba rhyme

with one trailing rhyme in the third line

Amongst thick green foliage and twigs of forest canopy are the haunting melodies of the heavenly feathered souls, mud puddles ripple each note that vibrate to fill airy goals, some grieving angels from heaven may stop here to feel happy.

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