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RAINDROPS

Raindrops Streak across an unseen horizon Lonely creatures Mostly unrecognized Tickling the faces of eager children Splashing in puddles Clinging to a distant identity Tapping on closed windows Shaken from the coat of wet dogs Destined to fade Into the flow of a bubbling brook Be overwhelmed By the current of a rising river Splatter, bug like, against a windshield Nestle among the rose petals Awaken a parched countryside To a peek-a-boo rainbow sunrise …poems are like raindrops

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Date: 9/8/2024 11:02:00 AM
Love this poem. Well written :)
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Date: 9/7/2024 7:32:00 AM
Poems are like raindrops! Gosh i would love to use that line in one of my poem too! What a way to describe poems! And i love “ rainbow sunrise “ this is just so very beautifully written in such an evocative manner dear John! One of my faves again from you! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/5/2024 8:12:00 PM
I like the fun of rain with a colorful rainbow at the ending. This is a lively tale.
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Date: 9/5/2024 8:04:00 PM
Love where those raindrops ended up, John! Thanks, gw
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Date: 9/5/2024 7:56:00 PM
John, One if yje most portic free verse poems, I have ever read, you did a splendid job. Almost like…the life cycle of a raindrop.)) Pangie
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Date: 9/5/2024 12:05:00 PM
I enjoyed read your wonderful "Raindrops" write. We need rain. Please send some, OK??? Hahaha!!! Great last line..... Have a blessed day writing away.........
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Date: 9/5/2024 10:39:00 AM
Hello John Lawless, Oh such a wonderful poem about the rain and rainbow. I like it very much. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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