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06/30/24

Raindrops 2

Third Place

Contest by JCB Brul 

Rains falling : Small droplets forming ripples on shallow pool in concentric circles growing bigger and decaying reforming recreating . Rains drizzle. Raindrops fall on leaf lamina kissed by blowing breeze in zest and zing. Showers of raindrops on running river propagating merrily. I am sensing smelling sadness of sky releasing in cries of bursting clouds. I am blending tears with rain drops.

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Date: 7/14/2024 10:35:00 PM
"sadness of sky", "cries of bursting clouds" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2024 9:33:00 PM
showers of raindrops running merrily, such a happy image dear poet. happy writing, congratulations.
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:26:00 AM
Nice poem.
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