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The clouds came last night Molecules were dense in love Moist are wings of doves ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 14/5/16,Kolkata

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Date: 5/19/2016 7:41:00 AM
Hi Probir, an excellent Haiku comes forth from your pen. One can see the imagery clearly. I do Love well written Haiku my friend and that is exactly what this is. I always think that Haiku are very creative. You have encapsulated your vision in this Haiku. This has to be a seven and into my faves....Mike.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/21/2016 2:45:00 AM
Thank you Vlad...

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