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A cloudy sky with streaks of grey filters out the light from the sun. And sprinkles soon sully the day, curtailing any chance of fun. A pelting sound, pommels the ground. Showers morph into a drenching as water floods gutters and streets. Quenching thirsts in need of quenching, a deluge of drops falls in sheets. Though rain's not bad; it makes me sad.

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Date: 8/5/2023 12:26:00 AM
Love the poem and the form, works really well, congratulations
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2023 9:55:00 AM
Thanks, Terry; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

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