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Race Day

The last piece of ground beef No larger than a quarter Eyed longingly by eight little eyes their manners for most part in order First eye each other to look for a nod And then to look at the plate Or to look for intent Should appetite break free in hope to fully sate Suddenly a hand shot out to make three laps in au jus Popped it into her grease rimmed mouth And bid the whole matter adeau

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Date: 9/22/2022 2:36:00 PM
Witty and pretty, dearest Vickey. Enjoyed it. Be blessed!
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/22/2022 8:26:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comment friend Demetrios.
Date: 9/22/2022 5:33:00 AM
Agreed Cute Vickey I wrote a poem called Optimistically Crushed Dreams Matinee May I ask you please if you have the time or will to please read it Thanks
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Date: 9/21/2022 10:42:00 PM
I would like to point out it wasn't my little hand that acted as if with mind of its own but my sisters.At first the rest showed mock indignation which shortly gave way to laughter .Thanks for the read.Thanks for the comment.
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Date: 9/21/2022 8:39:00 PM
Very cute, not sure if you're talking about kids or dogs though?
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