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Quiet Tea

Can't stand the word society Provokes immediate anxiety Same thing with psychiatry It's the opposite of variety It infuriates me justifiably Makes me act defiantly Almost all wrong entirely I rebel against compliancy Then I'll sit and have a quiet tea September 21, 2016

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Space Cadet

Date: 10/13/2016 3:05:00 PM

Perfect. I love it. :)

Moon Flower

Date: 10/4/2016 9:07:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this. Congrats!

Richard Martins

Date: 10/3/2016 8:32:00 AM

Love your monorhyme. Congrats on your placement :)

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/3/2016 4:05:00 AM

Hearty congratulations Tanis, awesome poem :)

Ironic Zink

Date: 10/2/2016 4:49:00 PM

This was the first poem to jump off the page in my contest. Great write!

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/2/2016 3:47:00 PM

I loved the way you emphatically ended this wonderful alliterated poem !! Great work, Tanis!!

Lu Loo

Date: 10/2/2016 3:39:00 PM

This is my fave in the contest! Wonderful rhyme flow loved it congrats on your placement:)-luloo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2016 4:17:00 PM

I can relate to this one too, Tanis. Every time I watch the news, I feel anxiety about our society. Love the way you just sit back and have a "quiet tea" in the end. What else can we do? Well done!

Keith Logan

Date: 9/22/2016 8:31:00 AM

I like this and totally empathise.