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why … could the universe not be created in such a way as to keep the things we cherish from perishing and rending our souls to shards? would it be so absurd to ask a loving god for such favor? that, a minor miracle, would be but a whim for a being, omnipotent, would it not? such a request should be child’s play compared to the deluge of extraordinary miracles that surround us each day - a day star nourishing the earth a sea that laps a million shores wombs that bear wee wonders and a foolish thing called ‘love’ that we all covet like madmen … so how is it justified, thus? why is time so short? why do we ache so horribly for what we’ve lost to timelessness? is heaven that thirsty for tears?? are angels so lonely? must the garden of graves bloom so abundantly? death has no favorites … tragedy, no idols oblivion yawns before us all, eager to feed … and we are left with no excuses but the one that leaves us wordless and echoes a truth that melts so bitterly on the tongue - it is mortality that is the sole consideration to ensure life remains ever … precious. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, June 27, 2024

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Date: 7/1/2024 5:25:00 AM
It is the obligation of the poet to ask such questions, seek answers, offer solutions. I know the answers to all your questions and the answers are not metaphysical or abstract but logical and satisfying. I'm here anytime Greg. Awesome poem
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Date: 7/1/2024 4:05:00 AM
This is such an evocative and powerful write. I always feel more a poem that questions and asks in a way readers can feel the depth and i did tear up as i read“ why is time so short? why do we ache so horribly for what we’ve lost to timelessness? is heaven that thirsty for tears??” Soul hitting! Profound and poignant! This is a fave! Pleasure reading your work always.
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