Quest

The first exploration was to the moon Where we saw how its craters are hewn We have orbited Jupiter to unveil the shroud and unlocked the mystery beneath its dense cloud, Man's curiousity has taken him to Mars He's seen Saturn's rings as he journeyed among the stars, Traveling to planets light years away To reveal mysteries long held at bay Exploring the universe is the ultimate goal But they must avoid the deadly black hole, and as the technology does improve To colonize other planets is the next move 3-31-2023 Sponsor: Constance La France Writing Challenge - 'Q' Words - Poetry Contest

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/6/2023 7:58:00 AM

An awesome poem Joseph - and I see congratulations are Due for a win, well penned Joseph. Please see soupmail. blessings, hugs, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/5/2023 9:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write/story. Enjoy your win/day with blessings................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/3/2023 6:33:00 AM

Where no man has gone before - we think. Excellent Joseph! Congratulations on your win! :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 3:50:00 AM

Joseph, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/31/2023 8:17:00 PM

It would be so cool to know if there are others out there. But will we be safe from them or them from us… Great write, Joseph. All the best in the contest. :)

Joseph May
Date: 4/1/2023 2:05:00 AM

Thank you Fin, it would be amazing if that happened

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/31/2023 7:29:00 PM

A quest that will go on, wonderful thoughts, Joseph:)

Joseph May
Date: 4/1/2023 2:02:00 AM

We will not stop trying to unveil the mysteries in the Universe, Thank you Jo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/31/2023 5:10:00 PM

God created everything, so there could be life out there somewhere, beyond earth. It's fascinating to think about. I think I'll stay here, while others figure it out. Many wonderful blessings to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 4/1/2023 2:00:00 AM

It is fascinating to think that life may be out thhere somewhere, Many blessings to you my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2023 12:19:00 PM

- A great poem, Joseph ... although everything is far from perfect on our earth ... I want to stay here - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Joseph May
Date: 3/31/2023 1:54:00 PM

Earth, with all its problems is where I want to stay too, :), Thank you Anne, hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/31/2023 8:33:00 AM

Well written Joseph. Did you know that out of all the space missions including the Hubble telescope and the James Webb telescope there has not been one sighting, photograph or any evidence of life other than earth. Not a single reported UFO in space. I personally find that significant. I enjoyed the read Joseph and love the subject.

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 9:01:00 PM

Talk about winning the lottery!

Joseph May
Date: 3/31/2023 1:51:00 PM

It is amazing that other beings arent out there, or maybe we havent found them yet, Earth is the Jewel among the planets

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/31/2023 6:28:00 AM

I like your theme--quest resulted in many discoveries--as your poem eloquently depicts.

Joseph May
Date: 3/31/2023 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Vijay, Its a quest to conquer space