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Purple Moments

An acquaintance asks me ‘how am I doing.’ I tell him I don’t like the color purple and move on. I am in Costco; a crowd is jostling, carts nudging me into places I don’t need to go to. Outside, a bleak sky is hovering as if it had nowhere else to be. A masked Santa belligerently shakes a plastic bucket under my nose. I don’t mind purple that much, except purple bubble gum and that Spielberg movie. The day needs tweaking but I’m not sure how or where. I used to be able to wiggle my ears – that’s just a fact. Driving home, I ask myself how am I doing? I need to consider that subject one day.

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Date: 12/9/2020 8:20:00 AM
Love how your feelings are immersed in the color purple. Always, I’m brought back to Sylvia Plath’s rumination on tulips. Very good, my friend! Tipping my hat.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 12/10/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Kim. It's a weird little poem, but I have learned to write down my thoughts and recreate events exactly as happened. Well sort of! Cheers and thanks again for the tip of your hat. e

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