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Purgatory Perhaps

grimaces around me there is no light here smog erupts through my visible soul I have yet to realize my location brain and heart are no longer with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/7/2008 11:47:00 AM
I don't really see how this is a 'cute' poem or one not original because it has original emotion to it---and we all really write on often a same subject but with different perspectives....we all do, it seems to me. And we probably should respect those differences in each other...
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Date: 10/5/2008 1:26:00 PM
Cute, but it's not that original
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Date: 10/5/2008 8:52:00 AM
People can never be allowed to define your light. Don't let others take it away...or they've won. Best wishes, Sara
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