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Provoking Thougts

Where is our defense? Suspense! Where do we go from here? Fear! Stop the nonsense. No pretense. Stop the mad Bear coming near Seems the time is right, to fight Seems this’ a game, with no blame We must fight but for right We must tame every name Where are our mistakes? At stake? What is the way forward? Rightward! What can you also make? Just flakes? Where are we toward? The upward! Am afraid, the table is turned. Wrong turn So we all must wake up. Don’t give up. The fear, we all must burn. The right turn. So we all can stay up. Always take up. What do you think about the system? Is there any room for betterment? What solution can save the system? Who can guarantee our betterment? Can you read the signs in the air? Analyzing, do you think they are fair? So where do we go from hear? Is there any hope coming near? The battle is getting more startling As we started the harder battling Who is going to hear should we call? Who is there to support when we fall? Seems our hopes are molten. Destitution! But we still trust to revitalize. Possession! There is a question I always keep asking But it seems everyone kept masking So I am waiting to finalize this quest And set ablaze the troubles in the west This poetic and emotional piece, Though thought provoking, is for peace I pray the star of our freedom shines Just like the bright morning sun shines So we can understand hidden things And always do but better things.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/5/2024 8:02:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:11:00 PM
Simon, awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 12/1/2015 1:23:00 PM
Simon, Enjoyed reading your poem today. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/21/2013 3:19:00 AM
I also noticed the alliteration towards the end of each line. Excellent!
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