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I have done nothing but cry over you for days... I guess that's something

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2012 7:45:00 AM

When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Tracy. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Date: 10/24/2008 5:20:00 PM

Interesting perspective in this poem. The last line was a surprise--nice touch. The title is fitting for the poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/10/2008 6:33:00 AM

Oh gosh, this is sad. Hope it is not true, too. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/9/2008 4:30:00 PM

Yikes, yeah, that is something...a clever poem, i hope this comes from imagination and not rl. love me

Linda Rutherford

Date: 10/9/2008 4:02:00 PM

Lot's of emotion in this. Well written with so few words. Just a thought...A Haiku is about nature, a Senru is written the same way, but it can be about anything..:)...Linda