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Primrose Blossom

A sapling restrained from its dirt prison Wanting to sail across the vast seas Yearning for liberation Rain brew in the mighty sky The little sapling endured valiantly The sporadic growth of the sapling now on tie Tempest devoured by the radiant sun Absorbing nutrients from the sun’s jubilance The days till maturity became none The petals of the primrose began to blossom A majestic scent pervaded the boundless air The options veered from lean to awesome Spain, Germany, Belgium, and France Foreign mountains, towers, and customs Now in sight from the blossom dance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/28/2013 5:30:00 PM
Hello Michael, stopping by to read this one again, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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Date: 4/16/2013 4:54:00 PM
Michael:-). Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/13/2013 9:08:00 PM
Michael, this is One of the most startling wildflower poetry poems I've read on this site. A late majestic bloomer, and still it will make all heads turn. I've seen these awesome flowers late in the spring while passing down the road cuts to my uncles in Georgia years ago. I love this poem so so much.... Enjoyed, your poem :-) Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT xox~LINDA"
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Date: 4/13/2013 10:27:00 AM
Thank you for your fine poem. - Welcome to P-Soup - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2013 10:34:00 PM
M M. Enjoyed stopping by this evening. Thank you for sharing, ~Always & Forever *LINDA
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