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Primed To Coalesce

season of mists and mellow fruitfulness, citrus squeezed, lemon and lime ~ love’s carrot-top drizzle. the umbrella man primed to coalesce, his yellow crop of hair blends with watercolor scent. grinning in the rain, she wears cocktail dress ~ tummy band stretches nine months as he pays for her drinks. cockle shells and wedding bells nonetheless. a beached whale rests on the sand ~ bouquet’s ready to pop. 1/29/2020 Famous poetic lines that inspire Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One “Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness” By John Keats

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Date: 2/5/2020 12:44:00 AM
I love where you took this Kim. A true delight! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs!
Date: 2/3/2020 7:13:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Kim :) - greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2020 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/2/2020 12:21:00 PM
great imagery in this one Kim, loved your creative approach to the theme...congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2020 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 2/2/2020 6:42:00 AM
I see this line helped you to create vivid imagery here.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2020 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! Definitely taxes the mind. Took me a bit to get started!
Date: 1/30/2020 5:54:00 AM
A beautiful Kim my friend. Deliciously written!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2020 6:40:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!

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