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Pretty Eyes

He tells me I have Pretty eyes, That he likes the color; They are blue-green... I wonder if he likes them Because they are so Unusual to him- His are the eyes of Un guate- coffee-black; Is it a novelty To look into the face Of a blue-eyed gringa? But maybe the color Reminds him of home- Could the blue-green Make him think of The Carribean sea? Does the way they Catch the light Remind him of sunshine Dancing on the crests Of waves as they break? But his body is the dusky Hue of a Caribbean sunset, So if my eyes shine like The sea as it meets the sun Every time I look at him, It is only because my soul Is saturated with the warmth Of his colors...

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Date: 4/30/2014 7:32:00 PM
Ten poems, one day?! Wow, that is increidible!!! Amazing write, u manage to convey all ur feelings in a few lines. I also notice u used the word gringa, which is hispanic slang for caucasians, plz explain how u knew this (Example: r u Mexican?) Great poem!!!
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Cameron Hartley
Date: 5/1/2014 1:32:00 PM
Yeah... I've been writing a LOT of poetry lately lol. And thanks :) as far as the gringa thing... i know a lot of spanish ive taken 3 years in school and more helpfully some of my closest friends are hispanic. this poem is about my boyfriend. he's the most amazing person ever, but he doesnt really speak english. needless to say, my spanish has gotten a lot better lately lol

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