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Pour Me Another Poem

pour me another poem make it straight something to cut the edge an end to an otherwise imperfect day give me something strong a poem to open my eyes one that is guaranteed in that very first sip to take my breath away i’ll let you know if it truly suits my taste and if by some miracle it does fit my need leave the bottle please and i will drink until the poem is empty and wipe drooled stanzas on my sleeve slurred words and blurred lines muttered neat

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Date: 7/23/2018 4:22:00 AM
Very witty! Hopefully you will find plenty to get inebriated on here and drink to your heart’s content.I enjoyed this very much RD thank you.
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Date: 8/5/2018 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Sylvia, appreciate the time and comment. RD
Date: 7/20/2018 11:41:00 PM
hah! I love this! I can relate as I am spending my time tonight getting a bit tipsy on poetry :)
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Date: 8/5/2018 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Becca, lol a healthier option for me and I agree poetry can be intoxicating. RD
Date: 7/18/2018 2:42:00 AM
What a great poem. There are some wonderful lines in here. I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.
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Date: 8/5/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thank you George, appreciate your comment and glad you enjoyed the last stanza, always nice to know the closer worked for a reader. RD

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