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Potter's Wheel

Thousands of gentle caresses, soft touch, From the potter’s hands to properly guide Tenuously stretching sides he might crush, If too much pressure his fingers provide. Young heart made of clay, forming on the wheel. To guide your unfolding, our sacred charge. Push we must, yet your own shape you reveal. A careful balance, an impact so large. Kiln’s searing flame awaits, the piece’s trial. But before, time drying, forming in place. Away from well meaning hands and anxious smiles. Then ceremonial paint brushed on face. Tempered by scorching waves of heat, the bowl Gleams triumphant, a grail to hold the soul. 3/5/16

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Date: 8/30/2017 6:09:00 PM
Hello Tom, when I went to camp in my teenage years,I worked with clay. I made soap dishes, plaques,and vases. Those items are gone now. But remember.ed. I never got to use the potter's wheel. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/19/2016 2:11:00 PM
Great write Tom, reminds me of my potter and the clay poem, but I like yours better! Great message, I agree with Walter "grail to hold the soul" just golden words. A7
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/19/2016 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 3/9/2016 2:03:00 PM
"a grail to hold the soul".....diamond words Tom...diamonds!!! :-)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/9/2016 3:24:00 PM
Thanks, Walter!
Date: 3/7/2016 9:19:00 PM
Your words mold a fine image and well crafted new pt of gold my friend. An exceptional sonnet for sure. A7 I WISH THAT I HAD WRITTEN IT! Adding to my fav list and thanks.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/9/2016 3:24:00 PM
Thanks, Robert!
Date: 3/5/2016 5:37:00 PM
Another well written sonnet, Tom. I have a poem entitled "Perseverance" about molding clay. Really enjoyed the read. Peace my friend:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/6/2016 5:33:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 3/5/2016 3:38:00 PM
You have done well in the object and allegory here Tom, so pleased to hear from you..'
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/6/2016 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 3/5/2016 3:05:00 PM
LOve it! Great write!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/6/2016 5:34:00 AM
Thanks, Ingrid!
Date: 3/5/2016 2:49:00 PM
Beautifully described! Gives true feeling of whole process
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/6/2016 5:34:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/5/2016 2:18:00 PM
A perfect sonnet to tribute a craft!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/6/2016 5:34:00 AM
Thanks!

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