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eight thirty, i spin and find my center, you talk about the weather, he smiles, and i remember. you stand and make me sweat. he wants to make a bet i laugh and then forget. i then proceed to swim at sea; he butterflies and follows me you praise your god unsilently. he grabs my leg, or thigh, or wrist. you, Devil you, don't make a fist. two more fellows on my list. eight thirty-five.

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Date: 5/9/2009 5:15:00 PM
Intriguing way of bringing my mind to your story ... pure orignality, rare gift.
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Date: 5/8/2009 1:31:00 AM
thank you. i do not expect the public to relate to this piece, since well.. :) i'm not really good at titling. any suggestions?
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Date: 5/5/2009 8:59:00 AM
The title & message are not so convincing to the general public, but, it's a good piece indeed.
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