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Within the depths Of my final breath I sink from the surface I have nothing left I’m suffocating under the silent tide I try but no air can get inside Amongst the pain Of the water’s force I collapse from the pressure With no remorse I suffocated under the silent tide Your laughing face, as I died

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/29/2011 9:46:00 PM
Great, great - as usual! Always, Laura
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Date: 7/25/2011 2:03:00 PM
This is awesome. Very descriptive poem and a very tangible illustration of anguish.
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Date: 7/25/2011 12:17:00 AM
Dude, I know marriage is rough, but.............haha. sorry :) haha. sorry man, sorry. I couldn't resist.
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