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Polarizing the Populous

Polarizing the Populous Heaven’s tide is far and wide as they manage in their malevolent mockery Their hands are tied and losing pride, dining without candelabra crockery In a calamitous chasm their dreams in spasm as they awaken the nightmare Scrapes of sarcasm thrown by the pious phantasm as they look to compare In a silken state the high adjourn and arbitrate for they conquer and divide In their cure to annihilate they castrate the mirroring images that they hide They adorn as they scorn the lonely for their wrathful worship falls to ground In their obsessive opulence with protruding corpulence sins that compound In a vicarious void, the mighty have employed sewn surrogates as their slaves Their will destroyed and must avoid the gravitational grieving to their graves In their impulsive impetus using stimulus, they must be freed from their chains Upon leaving inept infelicitous ideas by timorous travel thus exult in their pains. Aug.15.2018 Eight word challenge-8 Sponsored by: John Hamilton Placed 3'rd

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Date: 9/4/2018 8:55:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, ^WW^, excellent work - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
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Date: 9/3/2018 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations for your win WW! You have a way with words, just amazing :)
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Date: 9/3/2018 3:49:00 PM
Your rhyming is off the charts in this masterpiece WW, congrats on another win!
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Date: 8/15/2018 8:25:00 PM
Love the ppicture (video), the rhythm, and the painstaking care with your craft. Thanks for Compassion, and shalom.
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Date: 8/15/2018 7:51:00 AM
Your poem has an exciting rhythm; it feels like its should be rapped (and I am not a fan of rap normally). Love the internal rhyme.
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Date: 8/15/2018 12:42:00 AM
wooo man...ain't life a bitch : /
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