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Points to Ponder

Sailing on an ocean breeze In the vast depths of my mind Like a sailor on the open seas With a world of wonders to find Perusing points to ponder Through the night unto the morn On a global scale I'll wander Till an epiphany is born

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 7/5/2024 7:13:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, my friend.

Randy Freie
Date: 7/5/2024 10:05:00 PM

Thanks Jerry, I really appreciate that little brother. Take care.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2024 5:54:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Randy :) - hugs

Randy Freie
Date: 7/5/2024 9:41:00 AM

Thank you, I really appreciate your feedback and support.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/4/2024 12:44:00 PM

lovely poem! congrats on POTD!!

Randy Freie
Date: 7/4/2024 1:53:00 PM

Thanks Krish, I really appreciate it.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/3/2024 5:22:00 PM

Awesome, Randy! Congratulatiobs to you. Well done….Pangie

Randy Freie
Date: 7/4/2024 9:21:00 AM

Thanks Pangie, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your feedback and support.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/3/2024 2:06:00 PM

Once again, with feeling, Randy -- counting on that epiphany! Congrats on POTD. Oceans and Seas, Gershon

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 2:50:00 PM

Well thank you brother, I'm twice as appreciative for your comments.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/3/2024 1:47:00 PM

Thoughts are ' sailing on an ocean breeze, like a sailor on the open seas. ' I love everything about this statement. There's something so soothing about letting the wind guide your thoughts. When the time is right, words will caress the page. Congratulations Randy, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 2:47:00 PM

Hi Brandy, being a Navy veteran, I remember incredible starlit nights and warm ocean breezes that still inspire me today. Thank you so much for your positive support.

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 7/3/2024 12:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD! Inspirational.

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 12:36:00 PM

Thanks Benjamin, I really appreciate that. Take care my friend.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 7/3/2024 10:39:00 AM

And pretty pithy ones, at that. Congrats on POTD, Randy.

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 11:35:00 AM

Thanks Jim, it was a nice surprise to wake up to.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/3/2024 9:33:00 AM

Very good Randy, the poem reads both top to bottom, and bottom to top, I love it when that happens. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Beryl, I kind of feel like I just became prom king.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/3/2024 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed "Sailing on an ocean breeze." A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away......................

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Paula, it was a nice surprise. I'm fond of ocean breezes too, being that I'm a Navy veteran.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/3/2024 7:20:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, Randy! I felt like I was sailing on that open sea, and it made your words alight on my heart! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 11:45:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your kind support. It inspires me to continue writing.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/3/2024 5:46:00 AM

This is an enjoyable poem. Very positive congratulations on POTD.

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 11:47:00 AM

Hi Hilda, thank you for your positive feedback. It's greatly appreciated.

Steven Mwakatundu

Date: 7/3/2024 5:40:00 AM

Congrats on POTD. Don't we all like to ponder into the vastness of our minds. Reflectional!

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 11:50:00 AM

Thanks Steven, I do most of my pondering between 4 and 6 am. before I go to bed. That's the curse of being a nocturnal critter.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/3/2024 5:19:00 AM

Awesome reverie Randy. Epiphany is sure to come. Nice POTD

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 12:29:00 PM

Thanks Tom, it's greatly appreciated. Take care.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/3/2024 4:35:00 AM

Randy, nicely done, congratulations on POTD.

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 12:31:00 PM

Thanks Tania, it was a nice surprise. I appreciate your support.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/3/2024 3:57:00 AM

Very nice to read today! Congratulations for POTD :)

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 12:37:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, how nice of you to say. I really appreciate it.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/3/2024 3:43:00 AM

Hi Randy, Congratulations on this very nicely penned POTD. It has the vastness of the ocean with metaphors of keeping an open mind. I actually loved seeing this so early in the day. Blessings to you and enjoy your honor Randy..

Randy Freie
Date: 7/3/2024 12:39:00 PM

Thanks Nancy, I really appreciate your support and kindness.