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Poetic Form: Tanka
Inspired: 2024 July 20
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I: ? Resolve kids all playing ball old friends laughing of old times couples holding hands a lone man sits wandering face dried of tears dons a smile II: ? Resolve white black gray gloaming sepulchral downpour stormy amorphous rainbow hospitals overflowing clans gangs groups leagues board news crew III: ? Resolve days they brought the guns feeds the rich buries the poor days they brought roses scriptures says rumors of war news media says the same

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Date: 7/20/2024 9:55:00 AM
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Date: 7/20/2024 12:34:00 PM
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