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One day the flower Of your beauty, Inspired by an angel Of ancient time, Its light with me, Her wings extended. The sun and the moon Dance with her music, Echoing, Like gems of time, The world waiting To pluck the wind.

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Date: 9/9/2024 8:52:00 AM
I love the image created here. Fun read!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/12/2024 5:27:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/6/2024 9:39:00 PM
You've written an awesome poem combining the celestial with the worldly. Nice job.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/7/2024 7:26:00 AM
Thank you.

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