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Please Don'T Forget Me

Please Don’t Forget Me. . When I slumber and breathe no more And the sun no longer shines upon me My bones laid to rest Under idle peaceful ground Within a chest By a shady leafy sprawling tree Please don’t forget me . Remember the warmth of heart That once beat with so much love to share Although not perfect I did my best And I really cared although few cared For me . My life was always a struggle In a war I could never win Thrown into the deep end from birth But never learned to swim . But I was blessed to touched so many others hearts By word never uttered or spoken By baring my soul and deepest thoughts With honesty and devotion That resonated with countless thousands across the world Over the presiding years Through wisdom joy laughter And many tears . The tombstone above that bears my name Will soon weather away and be overgrown My life and being out of mind and memory But through my legacy of words Do not forget but remember me . For I was no different from you With aspirations a need to love and be loved And heart held dreams to pursue But whatever you do My words are heartfelt And if you desire to read What I thought and believed You may not always agree With me But please don’t forget me . Or it would be like I never existed. . Peter Dome©2020.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/7/2020 10:54:00 PM
Wow, This is so powerful, Peter, your sentiment here so profound, One hopes our words from the heart and mind, will forever be here, to help shape the future...Wonderful poetry...
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/8/2020 6:16:00 AM
Thank you Harry always a pleasure my friend. You are an exceptional writer, so I'm grateful for your kind words as always. Take care. Pete.
Date: 11/5/2020 2:26:00 PM
I agree... I think I wrote one about my death once...
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/6/2020 9:58:00 AM
Hope it's a long way off my friend. I think one reason we all write, even though we may not be aware of it, is remaining mortal through our words. thank you take care. Pete.
Date: 11/5/2020 11:42:00 AM
Hello Peter Dome, in memories your family will remember you. Talking of the good times they spent with you. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/6/2020 12:11:00 PM
Hello Peter, your family would not care if you were gone! Tha is sad. yes it is their choice. Your welcome. X Darlene.
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/5/2020 12:02:00 PM
Hi Darlene. always a pleasure.My family wouldn't care if I was gone sadly.Their choice. Thank you. X
Date: 11/5/2020 2:52:00 AM
Strange, I was thinking about a poem in my head and it started with, you will miss me when you are gone... I dont think this person in your poem will forget you, even in death, we seem to be remembered more.. Deeply emotive poem, I hope you are well my friend..
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/5/2020 12:05:00 PM
Hi dear friend. We seem to be having a few synchronicities lately.They say great minds think alike. Would love to read your poem if you decide o write it.Maybe all poets should write how they would like to be remembered, isn't that one reason we write?. Thank you. Stay safe.
Date: 11/5/2020 1:58:00 AM
- Yes, your words are heartbreaking ... a deeply moving poem, Peter - Hope you are well - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/5/2020 12:07:00 PM
I'm great thank you. Hope you are too. Just something that popped into my head for some reason.You are a treasure and much appreciated. take care. X

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