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I know not everybody in this world is evil,so please dont take that the wrong way.
It's some of the things I see in life just scare me! So I feel all I can do is pray. 
Please don't condemn me For whom or how I pray I sadly pray for the souls of all others That I come across every day I pray wholeheartedly with the feelings, That are felt from within my heart Also for those who think of themselves above me As they arrogantly rip my heart apart This world has become such an evil place Cloked in nothing but selfish greed So to those I can reach,I try to do one thing And that is plant a new spiritual seed So please don't condemn me For whom or how I pray I sadly pray for the souls of all others Before my life here is to be taken away
Dan Kearley:12-4-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/31/2012 8:13:00 PM
Nicely done Dan,,,, you and yours have a blessed New Year ;}
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Date: 12/21/2012 6:58:00 AM
Awesome inspiring poetry Dan.
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Date: 12/15/2012 10:40:00 PM
nice words you got up there ,,,, yes I pray for people I see broke down, or homeless, or ?
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Date: 12/11/2012 3:54:00 PM
Oh Dan, I can relate to this so much, I too pray for love & peace as this world spins out of control with evil, Bless you my friend another great write :)
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Date: 12/10/2012 8:08:00 PM
I liked the for whom and how i pray line, so important , doesnt matter where as long as we do....Seren
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Date: 12/7/2012 12:49:00 PM
I am so there with you on this write. it really hurts I know how it is oh, so well.... Just love how you put it out there with such a flowing poem. Your simplicity of word usage is why I have ALWAYS enjoyed reading you, and btw, in re: me either (facebook) you can google [cindy cayton Blueberry Jam] to get a free preview, and got my bragging rights just with you, unbelievable, I got the autor spotlight. You can check that out too! (well I did kind of in the excitment blurt it to Frank @soup
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Date: 12/7/2012 12:10:00 PM
Wow..that is really beautiful. It gave me the chills. If you can, read my "Don't Understand" poem and tell me what I'm supposed to do? It's far down my list...Thanks for adding my poem to your fav list! Holly Moore
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Date: 12/7/2012 9:53:00 AM
This is so good Dan, remember, "There is therefore no condemnation for those in Christ Jesus, if he doesnt then no one else has the right, very nice my friend. Love the Zappa Look,blessings, Carl
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Date: 12/7/2012 8:50:00 AM
how could one Dan, with beautiful poetry like this,,,
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Date: 12/6/2012 3:29:00 PM
Wow Dan! What an ausome prayer. I really appreciate what you have written.
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Date: 12/6/2012 1:31:00 PM
i don't know who you worship but if he says we should live like brothers. then he is the one you should pray to.
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Date: 12/5/2012 10:01:00 AM
excellent write my friend Dan...i like it..thanks for sharing and thanks for dropping by on my poem..Good day!! :)
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Date: 12/5/2012 6:09:00 AM
Well u r just a very special soul Dan and clearly u have a wonderful heart. Well written and great flow:-)
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Date: 12/5/2012 2:33:00 AM
Dan, very well said, like the new pic...David
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Date: 12/5/2012 2:16:00 AM
We should respect all religions! - We have no right to judge others! - A well written poem my dear Dan. - In December, I believe in Santa Claus! - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2012 2:14:00 AM
very inspiring write..thank you Dan for sharing you kindness <3<3<3 enjoy reading this so much :)SK
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Date: 12/5/2012 1:50:00 AM
What you are saying is so right. Lovely read Dan.....Seren
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