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Platitudes

Tired platitudes for the pain to drown, The bridled tongue will keep the fire bound. A dose of bromide help the words go down. Exalting paupers with a golden crown. Creating hero’s with exalted sound. Tired platitudes for the pain to drown. If our words of truth would be met with frown, We instead eulogize and chest proud pound? “A dose of bromide help the words go down.” Embellished sackcloth still an ugly gown. Vapid faces prefer the truth go round. Tired platitudes for the pain to drown. If only flattery we dare be shown, Could weakling hearts bear the weight of truth found? A dose of bromide help the words go down. When counsel concealed from one who is lown, For what good cause could such ones be renowned? Tired platitudes for the pain to drown? A dose of bromide help the words go down?

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Date: 5/29/2015 12:12:00 PM
An excellent VILLANELLE my friend! Your versing flow and rhymes are spot on and your imagery is outstanding! BRAVO to you!! Best wishes, Keith
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Md Johnson
Date: 6/9/2015 11:04:00 AM
Keith, Thank you for your generous compliment. I'm happy you enjoyed.
Date: 5/24/2015 9:34:00 PM
Very well done, and Thank God for bromide
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:35:00 PM
Thank you. Happy you enjoyed.

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