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Pill of Life

‘Go dominate all, Animals of humanity And all found within…’ Are words of divinity! Praying inside me, Contented being in thee, As pill of life tends to be, Swallowed thrice per day, And twinkles with soul met, For attractive aroma of the inlet! Cranking chapter lees, Mental intellect bees, Pill magnificent murmur! Life set when topsy-turvy. © Lucas Mkude 02/07/2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2013 8:59:00 PM

Your poem is wonderful and unique.. Lucas, a good prayer for a pill to have... good luck during this contest..PD

Lucas Mkude
Date: 2/7/2013 10:18:00 PM

Thanks very much PD. I hope this is the creation of the world which we all need.

Donna Jones

Date: 2/7/2013 6:17:00 PM

Well written Lucas. Good luck in the contest. I'm so thankful for the internet so the world can meet and know love and kindness survives and not just greed and hate. God Bless you and all you know

Lucas Mkude
Date: 2/7/2013 10:30:00 PM

I am happy for you Donna. You commented on my other poem and that means you were the first person to comment on my poems. I real appreciate that one and it gave me hope for more writing.The internet has real done something for this world truly we all agree for love and kindness are affluent than people's greed and hate. Be Blessed my friend.