Picnic In Bed

(form 5-7-5 kawanagi) pineapple wedges coffee belgian chocolate luscious mango bites posted in March, 2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/21/2018 3:54:00 AM

I am running flat out toward the kitchen, and I was not hungry three lines ago.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2018 7:19:00 AM

LOL Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Patricia Leduc

Date: 3/21/2018 12:02:00 AM

What more can I say but Yummy? Conjures up what else we might find. :)) Pat

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2018 7:20:00 AM

LOL Thanks for your visit and comment, Patricia.

Robertina B.

Date: 3/20/2018 9:54:00 PM

Very yummy Line! Well done..

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/20/2018 10:42:00 PM

Thanks, Robertina.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/20/2018 8:44:00 PM

YUM! I like this, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/20/2018 9:34:00 PM

The "à deux" was implicit.