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Peeping Through the Keyhole

He should not have But he did He tried not to But he had to No one was looking He thought he’d not get caught He peeked He looked He saw He wished he hadn’t He wished he could undo Take it back And unsee what he saw No one saw him But he saw him He knows And now he can’t unsee The thing he saw Submitted on January 5, 2019 for contest SLAP THE MUSE AND TURN IT LOOSE sponsored by JOHN LAWLESS - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 2/19/2019 11:06:00 PM
Like in-ringing a bell! Wonderful. Congrats on the placement.
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Date: 2/19/2019 11:38:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment. Timothy.
Date: 2/13/2019 9:09:00 PM
Well-expressed observation. Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 2/13/2019 10:14:00 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Beata.
Date: 2/13/2019 7:57:00 PM
Awesome! You feel the anxiety!
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:47:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 2/13/2019 7:33:00 PM
Back with well deserved congratulations dear Line!
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:47:00 PM
Thanks, PS. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/8/2019 12:33:00 AM
Fun! Like a bell that cannot be un-rung! Is that a word? If not it is now:)
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Date: 1/8/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 1/7/2019 4:38:00 PM
This is so brilliant... and like Nina, one I wish I'd written! LOVE it!!! ;)
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Date: 1/7/2019 4:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/5/2019 11:15:00 PM
Creepy ;) love it!
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Date: 1/6/2019 6:49:00 AM
LOL thanks, Maureen.
Date: 1/5/2019 6:00:00 PM
So well written, Line, depicting the fix we get ourselves into sometimes! Great write as usual! Snow plow guys have done what I described in the Shoveling Snow write too many times! I just get the driveway cleared and they pile more snow on it - just one of the vicissitudes of life I guess - ha - Bob
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Date: 1/5/2019 6:06:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Robert. Good luck with those many winter frustrations.
Date: 1/5/2019 3:50:00 PM
wow - you've captured that feeling so well, line, that it doesn't even matter what you saw!
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Date: 1/5/2019 4:37:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Ilene.
Date: 1/5/2019 2:51:00 PM
This is so imaginative...and entertaining, Line. Hey...I miss those old keyholes. lol
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Date: 1/5/2019 4:38:00 PM
So true, Carole. Privacy is overrated! LOL
Date: 1/5/2019 2:31:00 PM
this is devilish fun...you've left me somehow wanting to see the thing you wish you hadn't!
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Date: 1/5/2019 4:38:00 PM
LOL thanks for your charming visit and comment, PS. You certainly do have a naughty streak about you!

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