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Peace - Eye Rhyme

Poetic Form: Rhyme/Footle/Shape or Concrete

Inspired: 2024 January 09. As per sample supplied by sponsor.

.               "When        Each
             Man woman, and child
            are not born  to be wild
             there will  be love and
              laughter and peace
                 ever after. When
                   hate   ceases
                     to be, free
.                      we will
                        all be
                           X"                       ~~Quote by The Poet~~

Couplet - Rhyme:

Friends respond,
Transcends go beyond.

Missing piece, 
Kissing release.

Needs prayer, 
Seeds fair, 

Sew strong, 
Grow belong, 

Peace resumes, 
Cease booms.

Footle:

Peace
Release

Unarm
No Harm

Calm
Psalm 

Pure
demure

anticlimax
Relax

Love 
One above

dream 
scheme

moonbeam 
stream

gleaming 
beaming

tranquility
ability

faith 
Wraith

Transcend 
Befriend


Shape:
                                                          A       L
                                                   E.       x          L.
                                                W          x            P
                                                .            x              R
                                               P         x   x  x          A
                                                E     x      x     x       Y.
                                                A x          x         x  R
                                                   C          x         O  
                                                         E.   *    F

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Eve Roper Date: 3/3/2024 6:45:00 AM Amazing all those forms to make one poem , Lovett. Congratulations on your win. Hugs my friend. Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 3/21/2024 3:17:00 PM Thank you so much dear Eve. ..

I Am Anaya Date: 3/2/2024 8:08:00 PM So true, Wen. Way to go! Congratulations on a trophy win!!! Yay, your shape poem, hard work and dedication to your displays, very deserving. Hardest thing is to rhyme footles, the way they should be! It always amazes me to see what I'll find in your poems. I got the bubbly out--Champaign cheers SV! ~Anaya Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 3/3/2024 1:18:00 AM Hey you, I don't like Champaign, but I'm there if you open a bottle of green ginger wine !!!! I am sure by now every one knows my motto.. If you cant be better - be different ! It works just as well (sometimes). Thanks Anaya for your lovey comment.

Karen Jones Date: 3/2/2024 7:46:00 PM Wow this is amazing! Congrats on your first place win! Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 3/3/2024 1:19:00 AM Thanks beautiful Karen. Cheers Wen.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/11/2024 1:58:00 PM I love this masterfully written, fascinating poem of peace, employing several forms. So witty and clever! The picture and the quote are also wonderful. Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 1/13/2024 12:02:00 AM Thank you so much Evelyn (The brilliant Story Teller). Really appreciate your comment

Sotto Poet Date: 1/11/2024 11:59:00 AM Dear SV, the power of friendship and transcending difficulties through peace and love. The subject revolves around the various aspects of friendship and the emotions and actions that come with it. The diction in the poem is simple and concise, with each line creating a sense of immediacy and brevity. The rhyme (release/peace, harm/calm, dream/scheme) and alliteration (missing piece, kissing release) create a sense of musicality and rhythm. Unique shape as well. Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 1/13/2024 12:03:00 AM Thanks so Much. Comments like this make the time it takes, all worth while. Getting those deers to stand by the tanks was really hard !!!!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/11/2024 11:20:00 AM I can see a lot went into this collection. Well done. I too pray for peace. Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 1/13/2024 12:05:00 AM Great Sentiment for your comment Richard. Thanks so much May Peace be with you.

Jay Narain Date: 1/10/2024 9:06:00 AM Nicely penned poem. Great poetic form. Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 1/10/2024 2:56:00 PM Thanks Jay. You have probably heard me say it before. " If I cant be better at least I will strive to be different" Thanks for your encouragement Jay.

David Kavanagh Date: 1/10/2024 2:44:00 AM One must wonder where it all went wrong for humanity SV, An aspiring message for each of us to ponder here, this form works so well together, the shape is so unique too, cheers David Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 1/10/2024 2:54:00 PM David throughout my life I have pondered that question. I came up with: 1. greed 2. The desire for power 3. ( on a lower lever envy /jealousy. Once those forces take hold : Brutality and Bravado take over, and pretty soon you have a full scale war. I am still pondering a way to divert this from happening. I will let you know when I come up with the answer. I hope it doesn't take another 70 years!.